IT'S SPIIIIKKKEEE

I've been waiting very patciently to see this page!! YAYAY!

I'm over flowing wit'da joy.



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I love your sound FX. I'm not sure on 'snurf', but the Logan-finds-a-bad-smell face is hilarious.

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I have to say: I love how jacked up Logan's expression is in the third panel. <3 XDD

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For this page? What's so special about this page? *curious*

love the extreme closeup! looks like it could've come right out of the show.

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Lol at the Logan disgust face. I had a moment where I was like, "huh?" and then I was all, "THE SEWERS. BRILLIANCE." I also love Evan's face...you make him look like Evan. It's AWESOME. You need to draw Evan more! I also really enjoy Logan's hand in the snow...I don't know why. PLUS the crispness of those building lines. Rawk!

Blaze, I know you didn't ask for critique, but you say that you enjoy it when it's something you're unaware of. Since you didn't mention it in your description and it's more of a camera-thing than an art thing, I would like to bring it up.

This particular page of EE breaks, what is known as, the "180 degree rule" from panel 5 to panel 6. "The 180° rule is a basic guideline in film making that states that two characters (or other elements) in the same scene should always have the same left/right relationship to each other." (Wikipedia) It's hard to explain without diagrams, but basically, whatever's on the left should stay left and whatever's on the right should stay right no matter the angle. It can be disorienting to have Logan on the right of the panel suddenly switch to the left (especially since he's in the BOTTOM RIGHT part of the panel and then suddenly Evan is in that SAME SPOT the next). Here's a link to the Wikipedia site on it, it's got a clear explanation...and pictures! [link]

Just wanted to bring it up just in case you were unaware. It's a nifty rule to learn and one that helps me a lot.

I am actually having more trouble with Evan than I have had with Scott. Apparently I depend MORE ON EYEBROWS than I ever realized XD o.o

Evan and Scott can start the "We have expressions... No really! We Do!" club together.


S'coo, s'coo. I'm actually aware of that rule... loathe it, but aware of it. It wasn't a purposeful break on this page so much though. The idea on this page was to show Logan tracking Evan, and not necesscarily quickly, which would account for the changing positions, but in order to get the effect I was going for, I think I needed either more refrence points (to show a CLEARLY different local, and thereby, why the positions have switched) or, a completely different camera angle... an above shot would have worked nicely here.

Ahhhh well. I shall have to keep a closer eye on that in the future.


What I love about me: I can never just say "ooh, thanks for the crituique," I always have to explane my position... Eeeeegoooooo... >.>;

Thanks for the critique, nonetheless!

I needed a few minutes to understand why Logan has this I-sense-foul-smell face (which is hilarious) but it's my bad! I would have never thought of the sewers o_O Evan's face is still perfect. Like in the show. But I have said it million times^^
What I'm not sure about is Logan's hand in the snow. I don't know, something looks strange about it but maybe it's only the angle.
Speaking of angle: the last panel is again awesome.

EVEN

that and more Logan.


And all of your pages are special.<3

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